Journal One

In writing class, so far, I realized that write an article in a blog is not that easy, because everyone in the world may read our article. So, we must not make a mistake in writing an article. We have to make sure that our article is grammatically correct. Different words can be different meaning, even different letter can make our sentence has different meaning. I realized that we must not contain any contractions in making article.

In the next meeting of writing class I have learnt to make long sentences. I realized that a good writer must not write many of short sentence. In making sentences, we can add an adverb and an adjective to make it longer. With addition of adverb and adjective our sentence sounds like alive. So, the reader can imagine what our meaning is.

However, I still need to improve my writing skill because I still make some mistakes in my writing. I also have lack of vocabulary. I need to read articles in English to improve my vocabulary.
I hope you guys can help me with correcting my grammar and vocabulary.
Thank you.