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- Thursday, April 28, 2016

You Just Have To be You ( Part 1)


Hello, guys.
Nice to see you again here, in our beloved blog.

In this post I would like to write about a narrative story. It is a new story. It is made by me. The story will be separated in some parts. In this section, I would like to introduce some of the characters that will be told mostly. I hope you can enjoy it.

One day, there was a boy named Rudi. He was an honest person. He lived at the small town with some good neighbors. They were in High School. They were so close to each other. They even knew the lack of each person. Rudi was well known as a curious person. Besides, he always did something carelessly. It was done by him because he wanted to make an innovation, but it made his neighbors got angry at him. However, he kept trying to make it.  Although, they always got mad at him, they did not hate him because he had a huge sense of humour.

Rudi had a best friend who always supported him in what he did. His name was Max. He was known as a wise and smart person. However, he was very miserly to teach his friends. He was just busy with his own study. However, he never jeered his friends, he always gave Rudi a motivation when he made a failure instead.

Besides Max, who always gave a motivation and suggestion, there was a girl who hated Rudi. Her name was Lucy. Actually, she did not really hated him, she just felt weird when she looked at Rudi’s curiousity. She was very confidence with what she did. She had a spirit of a leader.

Lucy had a friend on her side which had a different character with her named Susie. She was such a shy girl. Moreover, she was addicted playing online games on her smartphone. She often forgot to make her homework.

They are the characters that will be told mostly in the story.
The rest of the characters will be mentioned in the story that will be posted next week.
Can’t wait to read the whole story?
Come and check it next week.
See you.




4 comments:

  1. I think, I am similar with Rudy. Anyway, I enjoyed the way you introduced the characters. It is very detail. However, your upcoming story will be better if you pay attention to the spacing.

    PS: Don't forget to hit the "space" bar.

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    1. What do you mean by hitting the "space" bar?
      Did I miss spelling the word?
      Which one is it?
      And by the way,
      You and Rudi, in this story are different, Rudi had such a huge sense of humour but you has such a huge confidence. :P wkwkwk

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  2. I like at the time narrators give an explaination about the characters, because it is can invite the reader to think "who is she/he?" after that the reader will be excited to read more if the character have a unique typical. nice story!

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  3. I can not wait to read the story. You will post it this week, right? I like the way you telling us about the characters. It will not make us confused in the story later. Nice one Zack.

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