Good morning, guys. Today, I am going to write the ending of my story.
I hope you enjoy it.
The next month, the school held some extracurricular
activities. The extracurricular activities contained football, badminton,
singing, and cooking. Each student had to choose at least one extracurricular
activity. They form of extracurricular activity would be spread on the next
week.
Rudi was confused when it was announced because he did not
know what subject he would join in. And then he asked Max if he had decided
what extracurricular he would like to join. Max worried whether he told Rudi or
not that he would join football as his extracurricular activity, but he could
not just keep silent. Then he replied that he would join football, and asked
Rudi how about him. Rudi asked him why he replied it quietly, and said that he
would not be angry to him if you said it. He also said that it was good for him
to find what extracurricullar activities he would join. Then Max said, “ Don’t
worry, bro. You will find what subject you like.” And Rudi replied, “Thanks,
bro.”
As usual on the next day morning, Rudi walked through Max’s
house and yelled him to hurry or the bus would leave them. However, Max yelled
from inside his house to wait for him. Then Lucy run through him fast because
she did not want to be leave and she left Susie away alone because she could
not run as fast as Lucy. And then, the bus started the engine and started going
to school. Luckily, Lucy was already in the bus, but she left her friend, her
neighbor friend. Then, Max came out from home with his mother and asked Rudi to
come in to his car, his mother would give them a ride. Then, Rudi went closer
to him. Suddenly, he looked at the back, and found that Susie was not already
in the bus. And he came closer to Max and said, “ Hey, bro. Our friend, Susie,
is left out the bus, too. Would you like to give her a ride, too?” Max agreed
with Rudi. And then, they came to Susie and offered her for a ride. Susie
agreed it and they came into the car and went to school.
While in the way to school, Max’s mother asked Rudi if he
had already decided what extracurricular activity he would join. And Rudi that
he still did not know it. And she asked to him again what activity was actually
you always did. Rudi replied that he liked singing while he did his homework at
home. Then, three of them said, “ Why don’t you join singing extracurricular
activity then?” “ Oh yeah.., Why don’t I
try it first, I like singing very much,” he said.
Then, the next week he decided to join the singing class and
he hoped that he will do it well, and he did. He had already found his own
world.
In a rush, aren't you?
ReplyDeleteI read your story and I think your ending is also known as an Alternative Ending (in a film category). Do not worry, It is quite acceptable though I want to read the "real" ending.
I am also happy to see that you have improved your writing skill. We are rival and best friend, aren't we? If so, then do not forget to study for your structure and writing test, Zak!
Ah, one more thing. You wrote: "They form of extracurricular activity would be spread on the next week." and I think you hit the "y" button. It should be "the", right?